Does anyone want to read this back story for the book I wrote in high school? 
It’s the first draft, so any advice on what could be improved, added, removed, made more clear, etc. would be appreciated. 
Also note that the title written with the Tengwar will just be gobbledy-gook if you don’t have the Tengwar font installed. So ignore it.
I reeeeeally need some help on the ending. The last six pages were written well after midnight in a desperate attempt for it to just be done. So please advise.

Does anyone want to read this back story for the book I wrote in high school? 

It’s the first draft, so any advice on what could be improved, added, removed, made more clear, etc. would be appreciated. 

Also note that the title written with the Tengwar will just be gobbledy-gook if you don’t have the Tengwar font installed. So ignore it.

I reeeeeally need some help on the ending. The last six pages were written well after midnight in a desperate attempt for it to just be done. So please advise.

“Turbatus the Humble”

“Turbatus the Humble”

Now proficient enough in the Tengwar to read the One Ring inscription.

When it isn’t in cursive… Cursive is hard.

Ashley wanted one, too.

His is actually pretty. Like him!

I did more Tengwar names!

The first one is “Theoden.” Theoden is actually my friend and mentor’s legal first name. He goes by Dusty, but Theoden is on his birth certificate, driver’s license, etc.

The second one is “Kevin”, my boyfriend.

The third is “David” another friend and former English teacher.

Lastly is “CJ”, my room-mate.

This is how I spell my name using the phonemic English mode of Tengwar.

I’m enriching my nerd-lore.